A damn good model and a cute looping animation, but pretty much nothing else. I'm marking it up for that music though.
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A damn good model and a cute looping animation, but pretty much nothing else. I'm marking it up for that music though.
Visuals were nice to start out with, but the quality sort of declines as it goes on. As the actual animation is rather limited, I'd say to focus on making the individual drawings cleaner.
Also, you misspelled "thief".
i plead oopsie daisy
aside from that, thanks for the critique! I haven't had much experience animating yet so thanks for your input :)
Wow, this was timely.
So glad to see this finally see a release!
Thumbs up to all the participants!
A thumbs up! :D
Wow, everyone else's art is so much...pinker than mines.
I mean, I went for a much more stereotypical Valentine’s Day card, but yours feels like a much more authentic statement of love. So of course it’s going to be less pink, because it doesn’t need to be.
There's a bit too much clipping in the middle portion that obscures the drum & bass.
Really good but please work on balancing your audio levels. The drop forced me to lower my own volume.
Understood sir! 😁
A good attempt, but it feels like the instruments are overlapping each other too much. The keyboard in particular doesn't sound in-tune with the rest of it.
For consistency, I believe the dock should be rendered in the same lineart as Gwen.
You drew Marcille well, but the bridge she's leaning on could blend more into the more out-of-focus part of the background as it goes further along.
Yeah, this piece is pretty old - these days I do a lot better with backgrounds, follow me, and look forward to it! These are just pieces I am uploading to catch up :)
Oh, so I probably should've provided a background.
Likes drawing characters and vector-like environments. In need of workplace experience.
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