ChrisOssu's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pet Shop of Horrors]

Composition is generally sound, but work on the shading. Things are looking a bit flat at the moment.

Skullgrin140 responds:

Thanks for the tip. Shading is something I'm still trying to get the hang of.

[Zelda]

The arm looks rather short from this angle.

Onimiere responds:

whoopsies you're right , I gotta work on that perspective

[MIKU’S 16th ANNIVERSARY]

I like it in spirit and colors, but the proportions and perspective are not attractively off. It feels like I am simultaneously looking down and looking up at her.

Vinnyll responds:

yea, you are right about that. the perspective is a bit harder to draw, I really appreciate the feedback though!!

[objection!]

The head is rather awkwardly big in a way that doesn't look like a perspective shot.

ONINNiko responds:

yea you are right lol

[Fire Peach]

The left boob looks somewhat weird, like there's an indent on it where there shouldn't be.

Onimiere responds:

i think you're talking about the comically exaggerated areola bump . I see it all the time in sexy western twitter artists drawings its awesome i wish it was rreal

[MEL: Pine concept sketches]

The arm in the last image looks a bit too long.

Kryptikus responds:

Damn, I never noticed until now, yikes

but thanks! I'll pay closer attention next time lol

[funny bunny]

Arms look a bit too scrawny compared to the rest of her body.

CZQ131 responds:

the shoulder is a bit too far out too. oh well

[Spar]

The thumb on the left hand is in the wrong place.

ButtButtTheNobelButt responds:

Thank you, but I'm rather certain the thumbs isn't in the wrong place. I was using my own hand as reference so unless my hand is somehow strange I'm sure it's correct. The perspective and form on the hands is definitely a bit wonky so I can see where the confusion can come from.

[HE GOT TOFU]

Look up some references. Sol's right arm does not look right.

KanariNG responds:

I'll 100% do that next time I draw stuff, cause this go around I didn't have references, but thank you for telling me-!

[Anna and Kristoff from Frozen]

Keep an eye out for the length of the upper arms. Anna's kind of look a bit freakishly long.

theartofdruid responds:

Thanks, I can see it now