His body is leaning a bit too much to one side.
His body is leaning a bit too much to one side.
I don't see it
Coloring and face are good, but the hands are really off.
fair enough, i know the right hand is angled really awkwardly, no idea if its anatomically correct or not and i pretty much thought i could cheat and have the sword block the view of the left hand so i wouldnt have to bother with making it look correct regardless if the perspective actually allows for that. got real lazy with this one lmao
Girl has a pretty sizable thigh gap.
:)👍
Like the form but the arms need some work.
okay ! thank you for your feedback :-)
Face is excellent. It's with the rest of the skull where things feel quite off. Unless that's the point.
Very much so, I wanted to give it a pinhead feel. But you are right, I could've been a lot less subtle thanks for the feedback.
Legs are a bit short, but the pose and lighting overall are on point.
Thank you! But also curse you because I hadn't noticed, and it would have bugged me to no end to not make an attempt to fix it. Adjusted all 3 versions' legs. They may still be just slightly short, but they're closer to "right."
Like the harsh style, but it's taking me a bit too long to discern the image I'm supposed to be seeing.
I see, maybe it’s because everything is stacking up on each other. So it’s hard to distinguish the background and the main meal. Thanks for the feedback m8!!
Pastel coloring is nice as is the general style and hands (which a lot of artists including myself still struggle with), but the right girl's head look's off, like the chin is jutted out more than it should be.
d(>_・ )
A lot of the individual parts, I like, but his torso and right arm don't look quite right when put together.
I see what you mean. I think I'll revisit this with more reference photos and spend more time on the body before adding the clothes. Thanks for the feedback!
Head looks kind of small compared to the rest of the body.
I will work on that 🙇♂️
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