ChrisOssu's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Faust]

Pretty okay, but I feel like you could apply more shading to match the fact that you game him a backshadow and shaded his bag. Also maybe push the exaggeration in the lines a bit more. Faust is a very thin guy.

FLONCH responds:

thanks for the critique! I actually drew this about 2-3 years ago and used pretty normal anatomy as reference, mistakenly, but ill keep that in mind for future drawings!

[Marce]

Great colors and linework. However, there seems to be a flub with the hand, unless you wanted him to be holding up his left hand.

[Resolve]

The arm is a bit too long for the perspective you seem to be going for, but the mood and lighting are otherwise on point.

[Grumpy Birthday]

Pretty good line art and composition. You could work on putting shadows in there to accompany the highlights.

[Sweet Sixteen Comic Contest Award Ceremony Comic]

Held out hope for an honorable mention, but it's understandable that it came up short considering the competition. Congratulations to all the winners!

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

Oh man, it was so hard choosing winners! Thank you so much for entering the contest and for your hard work! I really appreciate it! 💖

[Young Neil]

Generally good, but the hand in the phone pose looks a bit too small for the arm it's attached to.

[Marie]

Just a bit of advice. Where her body is being angled, her left hand should be visible in front of her dress, not behind it.

LimeSeaSquid responds:

Hey thanks

[URLATE//HEADBANGERZ]

Most of it looks sound, but the arms are weirdly long. It doesn't hurt to look up references when it comes to things like arm bending perspectives.

RayRassaArt responds:

Much appreciated 🙏🙏

[Pet Shop of Horrors]

Composition is generally sound, but work on the shading. Things are looking a bit flat at the moment.

Skullgrin140 responds:

Thanks for the tip. Shading is something I'm still trying to get the hang of.

[Golbetty and Simon]

To match with the skin shading, the shading on the clothing should also be more pronounced and defined. The lower parts of the pants also maybe have too many wrinkles. Looking up references never hurts.