ChrisOssu's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ghost Collab (Credits)]

Happy I could be a part of this!

[Hellboy: Boy of hell]

Personal opinion, but I think he body should be much wider.

Grumbley responds:

Honestly good recommendation yeah he should be. During the process I was so caught up on how I wanted to progress my style I kinda lost track of that

[Goku Day 2023]

Watch how you curve your lines when drawing muscles. His right deltoid looks rather deflated because of the curves not being pronounced enough.

[Upload]

Like the head. The shoulders and hips don't exactly match up with the perspective you're going for. I would suggest rendering the body as a series of three dimensional shapes to get an idea of where everything should be facing.

Exeposting responds:

Would you be able to provide a visual example as to how the perspective should look? :)

[Faust]

Pretty okay, but I feel like you could apply more shading to match the fact that you game him a backshadow and shaded his bag. Also maybe push the exaggeration in the lines a bit more. Faust is a very thin guy.

FLONCH responds:

thanks for the critique! I actually drew this about 2-3 years ago and used pretty normal anatomy as reference, mistakenly, but ill keep that in mind for future drawings!

[Marce]

Great colors and linework. However, there seems to be a flub with the hand, unless you wanted him to be holding up his left hand.

[Resolve]

The arm is a bit too long for the perspective you seem to be going for, but the mood and lighting are otherwise on point.

[Grumpy Birthday]

Pretty good line art and composition. You could work on putting shadows in there to accompany the highlights.

[Sweet Sixteen Comic Contest Award Ceremony Comic]

Held out hope for an honorable mention, but it's understandable that it came up short considering the competition. Congratulations to all the winners!

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

Oh man, it was so hard choosing winners! Thank you so much for entering the contest and for your hard work! I really appreciate it! 💖

[Young Neil]

Generally good, but the hand in the phone pose looks a bit too small for the arm it's attached to.