ChrisOssu's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Petra | Fire Emblem Three Houses]

The skin is rather distractingly textured. Work on smoothing the coloring out.

TheMintDrawings responds:

Noted, will work on that! there's a chance that is the filter/glaze i put for artificial reasons, but will look into it!

[GUARDIAN]

Coloring is pretty good, but I feel like the right leg could be pushed back more to make the pose more dynamic-looking.

youreashotgun responds:

I see what you're saying, thanks for the tip! :D

[Apples]

The arms look rather odd to me based on the other proportions. I would suggest making them beefier to match.

mhfkah responds:

Arms never were my strong suit but they're meant to be a bit lanky under those baggy clothes xD noted, though!

[Hellboy: Boy of hell]

Personal opinion, but I think he body should be much wider.

Grumbley responds:

Honestly good recommendation yeah he should be. During the process I was so caught up on how I wanted to progress my style I kinda lost track of that

[Upload]

Like the head. The shoulders and hips don't exactly match up with the perspective you're going for. I would suggest rendering the body as a series of three dimensional shapes to get an idea of where everything should be facing.

Exeposting responds:

Would you be able to provide a visual example as to how the perspective should look? :)

[Faust]

Pretty okay, but I feel like you could apply more shading to match the fact that you game him a backshadow and shaded his bag. Also maybe push the exaggeration in the lines a bit more. Faust is a very thin guy.

FLONCH responds:

thanks for the critique! I actually drew this about 2-3 years ago and used pretty normal anatomy as reference, mistakenly, but ill keep that in mind for future drawings!

[Sweet Sixteen Comic Contest Award Ceremony Comic]

Held out hope for an honorable mention, but it's understandable that it came up short considering the competition. Congratulations to all the winners!

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

Oh man, it was so hard choosing winners! Thank you so much for entering the contest and for your hard work! I really appreciate it! 💖

[Marie]

Just a bit of advice. Where her body is being angled, her left hand should be visible in front of her dress, not behind it.

LimeSeaSquid responds:

Hey thanks

[URLATE//HEADBANGERZ]

Most of it looks sound, but the arms are weirdly long. It doesn't hurt to look up references when it comes to things like arm bending perspectives.

RayRassaArt responds:

Much appreciated 🙏🙏

[Pet Shop of Horrors]

Composition is generally sound, but work on the shading. Things are looking a bit flat at the moment.

Skullgrin140 responds:

Thanks for the tip. Shading is something I'm still trying to get the hang of.