ChrisOssu's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Marie]

Just a bit of advice. Where her body is being angled, her left hand should be visible in front of her dress, not behind it.

LimeSeaSquid responds:

Hey thanks

[URLATE//HEADBANGERZ]

Most of it looks sound, but the arms are weirdly long. It doesn't hurt to look up references when it comes to things like arm bending perspectives.

RayRassaArt responds:

Much appreciated 🙏🙏

[Pet Shop of Horrors]

Composition is generally sound, but work on the shading. Things are looking a bit flat at the moment.

Skullgrin140 responds:

Thanks for the tip. Shading is something I'm still trying to get the hang of.

[Golbetty and Simon]

To match with the skin shading, the shading on the clothing should also be more pronounced and defined. The lower parts of the pants also maybe have too many wrinkles. Looking up references never hurts.

[Zelda]

The arm looks rather short from this angle.

Onimiere responds:

whoopsies you're right , I gotta work on that perspective

[Deadpool]

Head's good. Torso looks to narrow for the neck muscles he's sporting.

[Raffle prize- shoal]

You seem to have put all of the shading into the hair but not really anywhere else, despite fur and and hair basically having the same texture.

[MIKU’S 16th ANNIVERSARY]

I like it in spirit and colors, but the proportions and perspective are not attractively off. It feels like I am simultaneously looking down and looking up at her.

Vinnyll responds:

yea, you are right about that. the perspective is a bit harder to draw, I really appreciate the feedback though!!

[CRUX]

With how her body is drawn, it doesn't look like her head should be able to rotate that far in the opposite direction, but the presentation is strong otherwise.

[objection!]

The head is rather awkwardly big in a way that doesn't look like a perspective shot.

ONINNiko responds:

yea you are right lol