ChrisOssu's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spar]

The thumb on the left hand is in the wrong place.

ButtButtTheNobelButt responds:

Thank you, but I'm rather certain the thumbs isn't in the wrong place. I was using my own hand as reference so unless my hand is somehow strange I'm sure it's correct. The perspective and form on the hands is definitely a bit wonky so I can see where the confusion can come from.

[October 5, 2022]

The lump in her left leg makes it look disconnected from the hip.

[Scar fighter]

The individual parts look nice, but I don't feel like they properly combine into a natural-looking full character. I think the pelvis might be pushed too far back.

[HE GOT TOFU]

Look up some references. Sol's right arm does not look right.

KanariNG responds:

I'll 100% do that next time I draw stuff, cause this go around I didn't have references, but thank you for telling me-!

[Anna and Kristoff from Frozen]

Keep an eye out for the length of the upper arms. Anna's kind of look a bit freakishly long.

theartofdruid responds:

Thanks, I can see it now

[WTFuture Mark 2.0]

His body is leaning a bit too much to one side.

KadiTheFox responds:

I don't see it

[Astria]

Good design, but coloring is somewhat flat. You could also vary up the line weight more so that the individual parts stand out more.

[Blake Belladonna]

Like the coloring. Arms seem kind of thick compared to the torso.

[Commission:Tasuku]

Coloring and face are good, but the hands are really off.

smashbrethren responds:

fair enough, i know the right hand is angled really awkwardly, no idea if its anatomically correct or not and i pretty much thought i could cheat and have the sword block the view of the left hand so i wouldnt have to bother with making it look correct regardless if the perspective actually allows for that. got real lazy with this one lmao

[Power Couple]

Girl has a pretty sizable thigh gap.

SleepyPine responds:

:)👍